I felt like watching a storyboard without story.

Man, I for once will do you a favor and give you an honest and helpful review, so you can become better.

Madness animations don't allow for much errors, because it is relatively low-effort genre already, making mistakes in it is not justifiable.

All of the mistakes you should be able to easily spot and correct:

- overall extremely choppy movement

- after protagonist kills first guy and gets to the left side of screen, he gets hiddenunder an animation mask for a moment

- when he gets to the end of the first hall the gun layer is unmasked and visible in front of the wall

- the guy that gets killed by the knife almost teleports to the floor instead of lfuently dropping dead

- the knife appearing from unexplained direction, doesn't make sense and is not a comedy twist

- something weird happens to the guys face right before he dies from a knife throw

This animation is terrible but I hope this review will make you progress.

Cheers and take care.

I like the idea of taking a group picture after a collab, it should become a tradition.

C R E A M Y

I heard it first time in Ragdoll Laser Dodge game on some random site about 10 years ago... and now I stumbled upon the source by an accident. I feel nostalgic as fuck right now.

Magnifico

Nice, but I hate the curved handle, looks like a red pea pod.

Something seems off about that left shoe's orientation/shape. I think shirt stripes shouldn't go so continuously through folds and different parts of shirt ( e.g. the stripe that goes from back main shirt's body to the sleeve).

Cool drawing!