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[The Maddening Engineer Part 1 (The Unknown)]

I felt like watching a storyboard without story.

DGavrilov responds:

Well ... Heres The Joke! Its Called (Unknown) XD

[Madness Testification]

Man, I for once will do you a favor and give you an honest and helpful review, so you can become better.

Madness animations don't allow for much errors, because it is relatively low-effort genre already, making mistakes in it is not justifiable.

All of the mistakes you should be able to easily spot and correct:

- overall extremely choppy movement

- after protagonist kills first guy and gets to the left side of screen, he gets hiddenunder an animation mask for a moment

- when he gets to the end of the first hall the gun layer is unmasked and visible in front of the wall

- the guy that gets killed by the knife almost teleports to the floor instead of lfuently dropping dead

- the knife appearing from unexplained direction, doesn't make sense and is not a comedy twist

- something weird happens to the guys face right before he dies from a knife throw

This animation is terrible but I hope this review will make you progress.

Cheers and take care.

Amtemeri responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep that in mind!
Edit: I tried fixing the Masking errors that I spotted during the making of this film is too damn hard to correct.